hat have not been included虽是限制性定语从句，仍末说明包含在什么之中？

★   Such as 又显得无处着落，句子结构不严密。英文的含义与原文出入很大。

   译文②:  If, after the contract made by and between the parties becomes effective, there is no agreement therein on the terms and provisions regarding quality, price or remuneration and place of performance, etc. or such agreement is unclear, the parties may, through consultation, agree upon supplementary terms and provisions;

   评：

★   译文②把中文条款进行“语内译”， 会发现中文条款暗含个条件句，即，如果…..可以……所以用if条件比用译文①中的that定语从句要明确得多。

★   用agreement therein把agreement说得非常清楚，指agreement in the contract.

★   therein: in that; in that particular context; in that respect之意，表示在上文已提及的, 比如表示“合同（中）的…….，工程（中）的……”时，可以用此词。又如，表示“修补工程中的缺陷”可以译为“the remedying of any defects therein”, 此中的therein即 “in the Works”，又如“用于工程中的材料或机械设备”可译为“materials or plant for incorporation therein” 此时的therein乃是 “in the Works”。本条款中的therein指的是“in the cont

上一页  [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10]  ... 下一页  >>